Model Personal Paragraph

PERSONAL (Thanks, Taylor)

                [topic sentence]: Mr Bolos’s personal life was rich and diverse with a large family and many friends. [CLAIM]: Mr. Bolos father was Greek and died when he was 73. [EVIDENCE]: The prayer card informs you of his name, which is “Gus Bolos”, and he was the father of Spiro Bolos and siblings. [CORROBORATION]: This connects to the card discovered by Micaela stating that he was Greek Orthodox religion. It would seem by the sound and spelling of his name, that it is likely he is also of the Greek ethnic extraction.